Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows


Warning: Spoilers

So Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows was amazing, brilliant, enjoyable…until it got to the epilogue… So many new characters were introduced that I stopped bothering keeping track of whose name was whose and counting those little kids. That terribly fake “All was well” didn’t ring true for a minute, especially since I think HP takes place in the 1990s and I don’t think ANYTHING will be well in ten years. Also, the way in which information was introduced seemed contrived – like when a villain monologues and gives out the info that should have been given in another way (in exposition, maybe? instead of dialogue). Here’s my question: Did Rowling actually write this?

I remember that a while ago, it was announced that the last word in Deathly Hallows would be “scar.” Now, of course, it’s obvious that that has changed. Why? Did Rowling want to end it with “scar” and her editor meddled? What pushed her to write this crappy chapter, that bears no resemblace – in my opinion – to any other chapter in any of the Harry Potter books? Every other story piece has been a carefully structured cog in the clockwork that is her plot – except for this epilogue.

This isn’t to say that other books don’t have similarly flatlining epilogues – I remember Garth Nix’s ending to Shade’s Children doing something similar – what with a marriage and kids named after fallen heroes. But Harry Potter seemed above that… (And to be honest, I think Nix’s concise epilogue was written better.)

How would I have ended Harry Potter? Well, as I mentioned in my semi-review, Rowling could have simply given us more hope during the main body of Deathly Hallows so we would know that Harry and Ginny would end up together – I don’t think we needed to know they’d be naming their kid Albus Severus. Also, I personally might have done an epilogue that takes place one year later – and given an update on the restoration of Hogwarts, what happened to the Dursleys, what happened to Hermione’s parents, what kind of job Harry would get in the future (he was going to be an Auror, but then he messed up on his exams, remember? which was why I thought he might die in DH since he had no life outside Voldemort, it seemed), and the HarryxGinny relationship. But, hey, Rowling might reconsider (I beg her to!) and rewrite the ending to this. I wouldn’t mind buying another copy with a better and more fitting epilogue to this amazing series.

What are your thoughts on the epilogue? Was it a hack rushed job? Do you think others meddled? Or was it just not edited enough? How would you have done it?

Okay, I’ve waited long enough!! Time to detail some of my thoughts on the conclusion to Harry Potter. So, first, a warning: SPOILERS SPOILERS SPOILERS SPOILERS SPOILERS SPOILERS. DO NOT READ ON IF YOU HAVEN’T FINISHED THE BOOK!!! This is an excellent book and I would hate it if I spoiled it for you. So consider yourself warned. That said, it isn’t the point of this blog entry to spoil the ending – but I have to spoil some things in order to give my opinion.

Also, before I go on, I’d just like to point out that I am NOT familiar with all the details behind the making of Harry Potter since I purposely avoided them so I wouldn’t spoil the ending for myself in any way. Now that the books are over, of course, I may go back and read about the mythology that influenced aspects of HP and how Rowling came to write it. As of now, I only know what I’ve heard from my friends.

Okay, and here we go:
Deathly Hallows

I think it is interesting that so many online theories were right, yet none to my (limited) knowledge had quite grasped the scope of what the last Harry Potter book would be. The way love and friendship formed this book is incredible, as so many things seemed to come together because of those themes.

Harry was the last Horcrux indeed, but what implications did that have? Well, that resulted in one chapter that I cried my way through as he marched to his death – I wanted to hope that he would live, I wanted him to use the Hallows to conquer death, but I knew he shouldn’t – and love saved him…

As for the Horcruxes, let’s see… Dumbledore destroyed the ring. Ron destroyed the locket. Crabbe indirectly destroyed the diadem. Hermione destroyed the goblet. Neville killed Nagini. Harry got rid of the diary. And Voldemort obliterated the piece that was inside Harry. Theme: Teamwork! Even Voldemort lended a hand in his own destruction.

SNAPE. I knew it! I knew that if I just had faith in him, he would turn out to be all right. This, of course, returns to the theme of love as an all-conquering force. Without love, Snape might have ended up like Voldemort – a cruel, twisted being. The irony, though, is that fanfiction was right – Snape DID love Lily! How amazing is that? Also, I feel that Harry’s dad in the end did turn out to be rather arrogant. I’m still interested in learning what Lily saw in him (I know he was also an awesome Gryffindor guy), but I suppose it was like how Ron and Hermione ended up together. And Sirius, ah, Sirius…I wish they had picked a more compelling actor to play him in the movies…I always thought he was HOT and turns out he was cool even as a child…but back to Snape.

What a horrible way for Snape to die, although it did seem quick. I suppose he was on the verge of going off to find Harry in the battle and deliver Dumbledore’s message when Voldemort decided to kill him. I wonder how that would have turned out – if Snape had tried to help Harry in the midst of battle, Harry would probably not have listened… I was never a Snape-lover but I think he was one of the series’ most compelling characters – a traitor to Voldemort (which was awesome) yet misunderstood – on purpose, since he didn’t want others to know the “good” parts about him, as Dumbledore realized.

NEVILLE. Although this was not in my previously-posted prediction, my friends and I had agreed that Neville would be playing a larger part this time around, and he most certainly did! Heading Dumbledore’s Army as part of a mini triumvirate, and then slaying Nagini – Neville’s the man! The fact that his grandmother turned up was too good to be true; I’m really fond of her.

Okay, and the heartbreaking deaths. That Dobby died – that had me on the verge of tears, especially the sweet message Harry wrote on his “tombstone.” (Also, I nearly cried when Harry was reading the messages of encouragement on the sign outside his parents’ former house.) Hedwig died, which was sad, but…well, Hedwig is a bird. Mad-Eye Moody’s death didn’t bother me too much – he was a battle-hardened, badass kind of guy, and I figured he wouldn’t mind dying that way, though it made me sick that Umbridge had his eyeball placed in her office door. But Fred…ah, Fred! George wasn’t even mentioned in the epilogue – how did he cope with his twin dying? That had me in tears as well – it’s hard when happy people die – and once again, Fred died like Sirius and Cedric did – suddenly and irreversibly. Tonks and Lupin – that was a little hard to believe since we didn’t see them die, but it was also hard to swallow because they’d just had a son. If Harry had died, I imagined little Teddy growing up like Harry – without parents…and without even his godfather to protect him.

That said, the epilogue… Unnecessary, I’d say. I enjoyed the closure and having it confirmed that HarryXGinny and RonXHermione would work out, but I think that if some hints had been thrown into the main section of the book, the epilogue would have been unnecessary. And come on, “All was well”? As I said before – what happened to George – earless and without his best friend/twin brother? And what of Mrs. Weasley – having lost her son? At least Percy came back to the family before Fred died; I was very glad for that.

Several times, I could sense the tide changing. I would reach a certain paragraph and be overcome by the certainty that something was going to change in the plot, and everything I had believed before would be framed differently. For example, when Snape’s past was revealed. And when it became clear that Harry had to die. I think that was the most excellently written part of the book – Harry’s “last moments.” I felt like Rowling was telling us to value life without being didactic. And boy, did I cry through that. Even though I’ve insisted for so long that Ron was my favorite, despite his temper tantrums, I realized that if Harry died, I wouldn’t be able to bear it (and neither would Rowling, I’m sure). And it isn’t just because he’s the “hero” – it’s because after seven books, Harry’s become like someone I know. We’ve been with Harry through so many hardships, it seemed a shame to have to say goodbye to him before Voldemort had died. The chapter following his “death” reminded me of Advent Children – after Cloud “dies” he finds himself in a white space, with Aerith and Kadaj speaking to him, and then he’s sent back to the world.

Some parts of this book also reminded me of other fantasy stories. For example, Garth Nix’s Sabriel. At the end of Sabriel, the battle goes to her school, where she loses classmates and teachers. Similarly, HP’s battle goes to Hogwarts. I don’t remember any teachers dying, but we do lose classmates, and the pain is even greater since we’ve seen these kids for longer – I mean, come on, Colin dies! In addition, the mention of Spaghetti bolognese in the early chapters reminded me of Uglies (SpagBol!) but I don’t think that was intentional. Eew…SpagBol… And when Hagrid carries the supposedly-dead Harry, I remembered Aragorn carrying Frodo in the LOTR books, thinking he had died.

Also, a note on Expelliarmus. I am so glad Harry used it again! Already he’d used Unforgivable Curses like Imperio and Crucio (which I think was used at EXACTLY the right moment), and I was worried that he’d do Avada Kedavra but he did not – Voldemort totally killed himself. That was quite brilliant, even though Harry had been warned not to make Expelliarmus his trademark. And hadn’t he used it in the cemetary after Cedric died?

There were a few things I didn’t quite believe. For example, although it was magic, I couldn’t quite understand how the Deluminator worked; it seemed to do far too many things for just one “lighter,” and I wished Ron had used that walkie-talkie-like function again so it would be easier to believe (and he couldn’t use it to escape the cellar at Malfoys’ and go to Hermione?). Also, the storming of Gringotts seemed much too simple. So much time was spent planning it, but it didn’t seem like they needed that much time to pull off such a short raid on the vault, especially since they never planned an escape. I did like the way the gold multiplied and burned, though – thieves are killed by their own greed! Though what good is a blind dragon for guarding your gold? I don’t think Smaug was blind, was he? Lastly, Hermione was tortured, but later she seemed fine. No mention was made of it later at all. Even Ollivander seemed all right, or at least getting there. I think, all in all, wizards’ idea of torture is a lot milder than the United States’. Even Avada Kedavra provides a nice, instant death.

Those are my thoughts for now. Feel free to comment. I will probably update this entry in the future as more things occur to me. After all, I loved this book!! (Snape forever! And Sirius! But most importantly, Harry Potter!!)

Nah, I won’t spoil the ending. In due course I’ll be commenting on my Deathly Hallows thoughts, but for now I’ll leave it at my experience of reading the last Harry Potter.

First of all, the book’s price. Cover price is $34.99. Amazon has it for $17.99. I bought it for $18 and change at Costco. Barnes & Noble has it for $20.99 ($18.89 for members). Why is this book’s cover price so high? Half-Blood Prince was $29.99, and I dare compare Deathly Hallows to a similarly long fantasy book, and also the conclusion to a series – The Amber Spyglass, which costs around $22.99 in hardcover. If anyone has the answer to this question, I’d be most interested – why so costly when so many will want the discounts?

So, I skipped out on the BN party and bought Deathly Hallows early on Saturday morning at Costco. I waited in a line outside the building until 9:30 am or so, then darted in a grabbed my copy from the books section. I was out of there in twenty minutes (and I bought other things too). I’m not a huge Harry Potter fan in the sense that I don’t read HP fanfiction, I never checked out the HP websites or much of the theories (although I couldn’t help overhearing them), and I did not re-read any of the books in preparation for this one (but I ended up having to reread Dumbledore’s death in Half-Blood Prince and then Wikipedia its summary because I’d forgotten a lot of the minor character’s names – like Scrimgeour). But while I clutched Deathly Hallows, I couldn’t help feeling supremely happy – I nearly started reading it as I walked around, unable to get a hold of the idea that after so many years – I HAD THE ENDING TO HARRY POTTER IN MY HANDS!!

I think I got almost halfway through the book on Saturday, my efforts stalled by an acrylics workshop I went to (incredibly interesting) and the fact that I’d only slept five hours or so the night before (I had a doctor’s appointment at 7 am that morning…ridiculous, huh?). On Sunday, I agreed to help my brother move to a college dorm for the week, which took longer than I expected, and then went to the mall, where I nagged and scowled until I got to go home and…READ…

I don’t think I’ve ever wanted to live somewhere else more than I did then. How ridiculous is it for me to be reading for hours and have my dad jumping into my room to steal the book from me, nagging me from behind closed doors, telling me to give my eyes a rest and take a break? He acting like I was committing some sort of crime – and I was just reading!! But…I’ll be fair. Back when I was in elementary school, I got two Young Jedi Knights books for Christmas and read them in two days. For days after I could barely see right. So I guess it was for my health…but I’d risk it for Harry Potter! Within reason… (Slytherin brewing here)

Anyway, as I said before, I don’t want to spoil the ending. Other sources have already done that. And why, I wonder. The New York Times basically laid out the gist of it. And I guess it’s “news” but I think there are more important things newspapers should cover than the secrets of Harry Potter’s ending, and wouldn’t J.K. Rowling agree – that there is enough suffering in the real world for us to worry about and try to end and for the newspapers to cover?

So, the book was a rollercoaster. I agree with the Times, though – a bit clunky at times. I honestly felt that Rowling’s descriptions of romance (the kissing, come on) didn’t quite ring true in the books, felt a bit rushed, as did the deaths, but whatever. The point is – I laughed (even in some sad parts – I love Ron to no end), and I cried (and I usually don’t cry – even at the end of Specials I was only on the verge…not there yet – the last time I can really remember crying during a book was…Bridge to Terabithia? Over 10 years ago. Usually there’s just shock). I ended up with tear speckles all over my glasses. So read Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows, and laugh and cry away.

And when you’re done, read my prediction for what would happen. Granted, it was very vague, and I based it solely on Rowling’s grasp of the spiral-like nature of plot – and my confidence that she’d be resolving loose threads and sticking to her themes. Well, now you can see whether or not my prediction was accurate.

In the meantime, read this book!